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Friday, 3 August 2018

If I were a flood

If I were a flood


If I were a flood, I would downpour on the houses, trees, roads and
bridges..
I would destroy shops and towers with innocent people inside.
I would overflow the dam so I can have all of the water to myself.

Then I would pick myself up and fall back into the ocean, sobbing
because my journey is over.

Our hub was inspired by Katie Blooms If I were a storm
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 August 2018 at 13:37

    Hi Isla its Kate from Papakura Central School, I really like your poem its super descriptive keep it up!!!
    yours sincerely Kate

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  2. Anonymous14 August 2018 at 13:31

    hi isla
    i like the writing it is really effective to me the part is the parts with action verbs.
    yours sincerely tipene

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